I can rewrite that for you, but I need the original article text to work from. Please paste the full article you want rewritten.
Also: the headline you provided implies Brent Hinds is deceased. Before I rewrite, please confirm whether that is accurate. I must avoid publishing or amplifying false statements about living people. If the headline is correct, include the source or allow me to verify; otherwise tell me if you want a corrected version that does not state he is deceased.
